I thought I would try an experiment tonight. This is a song I started to write today and I wanted to share it with you in demo form, using only a laptop, some candles and my Youtube channel. It is a work in progress but I am really fascinated by the idea of being able to so instantly share ideas.
Before The Day’s Begun
In the dark
It’s hard to see
Hard to see
Where you are going
In the cold
It’s hard to feel
Hard to feel
The hand you are holding
In the morning
When I wake up
I’m tired
Before the day is young
And my mind
When it breaks up
It’s dangerous
Before the day’s begun
In my heart
In my heart
It’s hard to feel
The way I’m supposed to
Sometimes
I forget
I forget
The point of trying
In the morning
When I wake up
I’m tired
Before the day is young
And my mind
When it breaks up
It’s dangerous
Before the day’s begun
©John de Gruyther 2013
Impressive, even as a poem on the page. I can see you want it to be a song, but I liked it just as well when all I heard was the rhythm and sound of your words in my head….
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Thank you Nina..
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