This is lovely. My friend Rachael is currently writing a series of haiku and I think they are beautiful and perfectly worded, so please go and check them all out.
Hot air balloon rises
into the rarefied air –
wild snow leopard hunts
~
This is lovely. My friend Rachael is currently writing a series of haiku and I think they are beautiful and perfectly worded, so please go and check them all out.
Hot air balloon rises
into the rarefied air –
wild snow leopard hunts
~
Only the penitent moviewatcher shall pass.
Award-winning fantasy for ages 9-14
Never / Hungry / The / Poem / Is
Thank you, dear friend. You’ve made my day! 🙂
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I agree the haiku is impressive but the amended one is even better!
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